Final Storyboard

Storyboard Alterations

Final Script

<Bedroom>

George: (Sat on bed, acting shift & nervous, eyes glancing all over the room)

          (Looks along shelf of trophies sees football trophy )

ZOOMS into football trophy

- 1ST FLASHBACK

<Local Park>

Young George: (Begin to walk away from camera)

All team mates: (Run up behind Y.G. a few at a time, laugh & put Y.G. onto two people’s shoulders). Yeah! (chant) Champions, champions, champions.

All: Champions! (Walk away to distance)

BLINK


<bedroom>
(George scans shelf sees photo of parents)


ZOOMS into photo of parents 


2ND FLASHBACK

<Newspaper section>
parents killed in car accident shows articles and photos

BLINK


<bedroom> 
(George deep in thought)


BLINK - 
3RD FLASHBACK

<Bar>

George: (Finish your beer and then scramble through the door drunk. Sit on the floor outside in a slumped mess)

BLINK

<Bedroom>

George: (Look down at pills in hand, confused & crazed eyes)

<Institutional Information>

Script Alterations

Actors List

These are the actors that we have chosen to star in out teaser trailer;

• 6-10 Richmond school students= Football team
• Jonny Brown= the main teenage boy

• Roland & Diane Terry= Teenage boy's parents

• Mathew (The Owner of the Castle Tavern Pub)= Barman

Script, Draft One

Here is the first draft of our script;

<Bedroom>

Jonny: (Sat on bed, acting shift & nervous, eyes glancing all over the room)

          (Looks along shelf of trophies)

BLINK

<Local Park>

Young Jonny: (Begin to walk away from camera)

All team mates: (Run up behind Y.J. a few at a time, laugh & put Y.J. onto two people’s shoulders). Yeah!  (chant) Champions, champions, champions.

All: Champions! (Walk away to distance)

BLINK

<Newspaper section>

BLINK

<Bar>

Barman: I told you last time, stay out! (Fling Jonny onto the pavement)

Jonny: (Scramble to feet & appear angry yet defeated)

BLINK

<Bedroom>

Jonny: (Look down at pills in hand, confused & crazed eyes)

<Institutional Information>

*Still going to be called J?